I just noticed something about the text that might be improved on, but it really it nit-picking so you can ignore this if you want. I have always found that text looks more professionally done when there are double spaces after the end of a sentence. It really stems back from character spacing on a typewriter, but I always liked the look better than the single space.

<shrug>

Told ya it was nit-picking,
Terrin

I was talking about the in-game text, specifically.

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